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After a long boring day at School Ana was walking home she was just around the corner from the crazy woman's house, She turned her mobile phone on - She checked the answering machine for new messages, she found a least expected message, it was from her mother’s divorce lawyer. Even though she was aware of what was happening between her parents, she was still surprised. Things were bad between her parents, and her mum had already threatened to divorce with her father one that year. They started going out on dates again afterwards, though, and Ana thought they were fine after that. Before things turned sour Ana though her family was normal. Even Suzie her best friend once commented that her family was perfect, It turns out not so much.
Unfortunately her parents officially divorced that September, Soon Ana and her mother moved to a completely different place. For Ana it was a nightmare.. One day she was living among the piles of boxes at their house, and the next she was sleeping on a mattress on the ground in a foreign house, going to a completely different bus stop in a different neighbourhood. Ana’s 17th Birthday was only a matter of months after the divorce, and it was a nightmare. Both of her parents were there, along with most of her mum’s family. Everyone tried to pretend that everything was normal, but it wasn’t. Some of Ana’s relatives didn’t even want to attend her birthday.
A year later after the divorce,
it was very stressful for Ana, although she settled into a routine after six months,
she still wouldn’t stand everything that has happened in the past. Ana’s was juggling
both of her own problems and her family’s problems, along with a whole advance of
school overdue work. She almost broke under the pressure. The fact that she didn’t
talk to anyone about the divorce at first, and then moving to a completely
different place and not being able to see her friends. On the other hand, Ana's
mother was facing
some financial problems, such as no income, trying to pay the same bills, and no
way to afford groceries.
it was very stressful for Ana, although she settled into a routine after six months,
she still wouldn’t stand everything that has happened in the past. Ana’s was juggling
both of her own problems and her family’s problems, along with a whole advance of
school overdue work. She almost broke under the pressure. The fact that she didn’t
talk to anyone about the divorce at first, and then moving to a completely
different place and not being able to see her friends. On the other hand, Ana's
mother was facing
some financial problems, such as no income, trying to pay the same bills, and no
way to afford groceries.
Then One day Ana was strolling the boring street around from her house.
Coming home she found a box with heaps of food inside, she was filled with tears of
joy and she remembered one of the days that her father had got her a box of toys
when she was young but now it was a box of food. This went on for months;
coming home
finding a grey box of food in front of their door. When her mother finally got a job
their
angel stopped providing food. Ana and her mother never did find out who it was
who left the box of food for them, but that kind-hearted person truly saved their
lives.
Coming home she found a box with heaps of food inside, she was filled with tears of
joy and she remembered one of the days that her father had got her a box of toys
when she was young but now it was a box of food. This went on for months;
coming home
finding a grey box of food in front of their door. When her mother finally got a job
their
angel stopped providing food. Ana and her mother never did find out who it was
who left the box of food for them, but that kind-hearted person truly saved their
lives.
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